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Friday, May 16, 2008

Dog for a walk


After I came to Japan, I was bicycle ridable.
The dog was put in front of the bicycle and the bicycle was practiced one day while strolled of the dog.
However, whether it struck it to the utility pole was put away.
The dog has flown out from the bicycle by the shock.
It did not move because the dog fell in shock though I ended due to slight injury.

4 comments:

Tomoki said...

I think 'After I came to Japan,I rode bicycle'is correct at first sentence.
Then, I have experienced injury at riding bicycle. It's very danger.

miki said...

Your dogs is very cute! Were they all right after that accident? I have fallen sometime, but I ride a bicycle almost everyday.

kang kyoung mi said...

Tomoki thank you.^^

kang kyoung mi said...

Sorry miki.
I haven't dog.
It's imege picture.
I have a cat as a pet.