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Monday, May 19, 2008

My favorite dessert


I usually eat ice-cream. I love ice-cream
In particular choco ice-cream and milk ice cream
In fact ice cream is not healthy food.
However very delicious. for instance I eat choco ice cream when gloomy. at than feeling is good!
Moreoner, now ice cream is make to nature material.
Its healthy and delicious. I want to go with GC1class friend to beskinlavins 31 !! ^~^)/

4 comments:

miki said...

I like ice cream and it becomes more delicious from now on because summer comes! I like eating it on summer, but in winter too. I think ice cream is delicious anytime!

Tomoki said...

I saw this phrase ' I want go wiht GC1 class ' at 8th line. I think 'want go' is mistake ' want to go' and 'wiht' is mistake 'with'.

I like ice cream too. Especialy, I like Haagen Dazs Strowberry taste. It's great ice cream, but it's expensive. Do you like Haagen Dazs?

kang kyoung mi said...
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kang kyoung mi said...

I like too.
beskinlavins31's very delicious.