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Thursday, May 29, 2008

My misstake


I have the baby dog when I was a child.
At that time My home next houes was many a puppys.
I wanted a puppy. So, every day I went to go and looked at puppy at next houes.
Some day, Next house`s uncle said that If I was singing for uncle and auntie . Then puppy give to me.
I was sining the children`s song and I got puppy!!^^

I love my puppy!! everytime together.
We were happy.
One day father called me. He was a mission to me what I went shopping at a supermaket.
I was very happy beacuse I get a cookie and forgot to lock a door that I went toward supermaket.

I heard car`s break sound but I saw nothing That was far away.
I come back home. I knew. Why I heard car`s break sound.
My puppy was slept.
I think..look at me my puppy. then puppy was following me.
So puppy was an accident on following me.

I very sad. I was careful that my puppy was live to me.
My first puppy was so slept. Now very sorry to puppy.

3 comments:

Tomoki said...

I have a dog now. I think puppy is very cute too. What's kind of dog did you have?

kang kyoung mi said...

Cute dog.
I want have a dog.
I have a cat now.
Great! the dog be found^^

Paul Marlowe said...

When you say the puppy "slept", do you mean that the puppy died? If this is true, that is a very sad story and I'm sorry for you and the puppy.