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Saturday, May 31, 2008

Gentleman..


Before 3years happened somthing.
The memory of these gentleman will last all through my life.
I got tired from the one-hour stand.
And I slept with stood up in the train.
Oldman siting in my front.maybe 50years age.
His reading a book.
Suddenly he speaking to me.
He said"please sitting for you"
I was surprised.
I said"That's all light no thanks"
He side"Please make yourself comfortable sitting"
I said"thank you vary much for your kindness"
His with stood up the reading a book.
Rest through his kindness.

3 comments:

Tomoki said...

I think 'I got tired to stand for one hour' is much better at 4th line.

I think it's very hearty story. He is very kind man!

Paul Marlowe said...

Was this in Japan? Many Japanese people are so courteous and kind. This is one of the things I really like about Japan.

Ahn Ji Yeon said...

You met very kind people. I never have been that. may be he is very good father at home