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Welcome GC1 students and other visitors. This is a graduate course for writing at the Osaka YMCA International College. Students will be adding short pieces of writing to this blog throughout the semester based on what they will be learning from the textbook, Significant Scribbles.

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Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Heart


Recently I went to go to Udonya.
There is famous place.
Very delicious!
I'm finded little heart.
That's green onion.
I haven't lovely heart.
Quote a well-known saying
'Act with one heart and mind'.
The People is have a only one heart.
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1 comment:

Tomoki said...

I think "I found small heart" is correct at 4th line.

Is it onion?
I have never seen onion like this shape.

July 8, 2008 at 4:31 AM

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